Wednesday, March 5, 2014

Creative

On a Great White Plain
We ride in the deep deep snow
Gracefully sliding

2 comments:

  1. Great Haiku Austin! I like how you used to describe the mountain as a great white plain and how gracefully we slide down that plain, no one has said anything to describe snowboarding in a Haiku any better than this!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Nice poem it describes how snowboarding is like on the Great White Plain. I think that you get pretty excited about it. Do you plan to show a video showing how you snowboard?
    A.O.

    ReplyDelete